In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this case happening? How should children or teenagers be punished?
It is true that there is an increasing number of underage criminals in some parts of the world. This trend can stem from some reasons, and I firmly believe that adolescents should receive an equivalent punishment if they repeatedly commit crimes or carry out heinous crimes.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why more kids have a tendency to break the law at an early age. The bottom line is the lack of parental guidance and moral education from teachers. Nowadays, parents are inclined to be too lenient with their offspring’s unacceptable behaviours. Meanwhile, teachers only focus on their students’ scholastic performance and neglect delivering ethical lessons. Therefore, this shortcoming in education can give rise to their kids’ unexpected offences. Moreover, the wall-to-wall media coverage of extreme criminal behaviours that children approach can also contribute to this trend. While children are easily susceptible to anything they deem to be mysterious to them, the sensational news about heinous crimes can incite them to emulate the ex-perpetrators to satisfy their curiosity.
On the other hand, I would argue that children and teenagers only should receive an appropriate punishment if they commit vicious crime or for the second time. It is obvious that some first-time underage criminals have no understanding of the consequences of their misbehaviour. Therefore, giving them softer punishment could be enough to prevent them from doing further harm to society. However, if these juvenile delinquents keep crossing the bottom line of the legal system, there is little reason to protect them from harsh punishment. So no matter how young they are, breaking the law seriously for the second time, like drug trafficking, deserves a harsh penalty.
In conclusion, insufficient education and adverse effects of media contribute to this trend; and I hold a conviction that adolescents should incur equivalent punishment depending on each situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52117263844 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04061498271 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609120521173 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6250673113 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208261288211 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570130605407 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557868888654 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113397831776 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241761713704 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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