News is playing a vital role in our life today and people are getting much influenced by the news now. Some say that news has no connection with most people's life and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspaper and watch television news program. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the news is fundamental to our life in the present day, and it is exerting considerable effects on human beings. While some individuals claim that reading newspapers and watching television news broadcasts is time-wasting as there is no correlation between people’s lives and them, I strongly disagree with this viewpoint.
Firstly, reports about recent events are closely associated with the life of humans. As news coverage makes the public keep abreast of current affairs, it can sometimes save lives and reduce casualties. There is a lot of uncertainty about the surroundings, and people are susceptible to the damage caused by accidents, crimes and natural catastrophe. The news media conveys the firsthand information to concerned audiences and enable them to take corresponding actions right away. The authority can declare a state of emergency when it is necessary, organize evacuation and distribute aid to the needy areas. All these efforts count on the news media as a messenger, and it will be beneficial for people to catch up on such updated information. Reading
Furthermore, reading newspapers and watching television news broadcasts is not a waste of time, and it brings enormous benefits to human beings instead. It starts with the educational features of the news, especially that deriving from official sources, namely local government magazines or verified international news platforms. For instance, if someone is passionate about the economic field, “The Economist”, the English-language weekly magazine-format newspaper, is a reliable source for him to find in-depth articles written by economic experts. This will help people gain profound understanding of the topics they are engrossed in. Secondly, reading newspapers help people socialize with others, as it enables them to take part in every discussion pertaining to both current affairs.
In conclusion, I would argue that there is a strong connection between the news and people’s lives; thus, it is valuable if people spare the time to get up-to-date information on newspapers or television.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56790123457 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21310823784 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4704333016 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.857142857 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391540159024 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120271598892 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851122122775 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248747928919 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059759721762 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.