News is playing vital role in life today and people are getting much influenced by the news now. Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is waste of time for most of us to read newspaper and watch television news program. Do you agree or disagree?
News has become increasingly important in life, and it has an enormous impact on people these days. However, it is believed by some that most people waste their time to read newspapers and watch news on the television. While I agree that several pieces of news are unhelpful, I would argue that there is much useful news closely related to people’s life.
On the one hand, news which does not connect to most people has been relatively prevalent. One reason is that celebrity gossip and rumours, which are increasingly exposed in order to attract people’s attention, have no common ground with the majority of people. This is exemplified by the married life of the famous singer Justin Bieber which is really disconnected from most people’s life, but it draws significant concern from many youngsters. Additionally, since news reports on much violence and serious accidents, people might have a pessimistic view of the place where they are living if they spend much time on this news.
On the other hand, there are some reasons why people should read or watch news daily. First, keeping track of various reliable news about events happening not only within their nation but worldwide, people can aware of vital information which directly influences the way they behaviour. For instance, people continuously updated the information of the outbreak of H5N1 influenza so as to prevent themselves from being infected. Second, it is apparent that news is a mountainous source of human knowledge to which people could have access in order to broaden their minds. For example, reading news on the global banking system is usually useful for my career as a banker, helping me stand out from my colleges.
In conclusion, while some news which has no connection with the life of most people is not worth reading or watching, I believe that many trustworthy sources of news are really informative and educational.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ation of the outbreak of H5N1 influenza so as to prevent themselves from being infected....
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08544303797 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73853050943 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566455696203 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5151083382 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.615384615 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.516399231754 0.244688304435 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202719754711 0.084324248473 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103560025842 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.359579478502 0.151304729494 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083638045843 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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