Many people are afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime while others feel that little action Can be done to stop crime.what is your view?
It is indeed fact that,crime is spreading tentacles in society day by day. It has adverse effect on people life.while,other considered that,owing to little step we should overcome this hazard.thus,In my opinion,there are many path to address this phenomenon by official.because they should be taken step for reducing the crime. There are manifold points to shore up its problems.first and formost ,most of mass face problem in whole world related to commit crime.because such crime are spreading its roots in all society such as,murder,kidnapping,and so forth. There,such can be solved by official because they should make rule and regulation for controlling these problem. Secondly,we can see that ,the availability of crime is destructive impact on human work . To be specific,most of mankind cannot do work in fix place,because of enhance crime and they leave their house and apartment for living better life without fear offences. Next,increasing the bad activity can bad effect on new generation,because they follow the such trend in their life,owing to that,they are moulding crime themselves. It has dangerous impact on nation traditional skill and path of life. Therefore when government should be taught step to protect the country. On the other hand,other masses believe that,official should take little step by providing fundamental needs,such as,food shelter,education and so on.with the help of these facilities,they can be involved in better activity.which is profitable for them to get better education and earn name and fame in their society. What is more,it is true that most of younger want to supreme education in their life.owing to that,getting handsome study they commit crime.so,official and individual of every nation should take some action to overcome this obstacles. To conclude, I firmly believe that,reducing the crime is very worthwhile for society because such crime has bad effect on human employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, in my opinion, it is true, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50841750842 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54192047718 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0465316549 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30834657847 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110177974742 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596157811796 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30834657847 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.