Many people believe that the current generation of children does not know how to interact socially with others. Why is this the case? What can be done to encourage more social interaction between children?
Many argue that the generation of today lack of social communication skills. This problem is due to the Internet and parents should limit the use of the Internet in order to encourage interaction with their peers.
The main reason why children of today do not have well developed social skills is because of the Internet. Boys and girls tend to stay indoor rather than spending time with their friends. They are hooked with playing online games or watching movies which are the main reasons why they sit in front of their computers or gadgets for a long time. This nature of the Internet deprives children to enhance and learn their skills in interacting with others. For example, a recent study conducted by the Association of Pediatric Doctors in the Philippines revealed that the number of children who play in the parks reduced significantly when Internet accessibility became easier.
The best solution to this predicament is parents should limit the use of the Internet. This is to say that fathers and mothers should strictly allocate a certain time their offsprings could use the Internet. By doing this, children would resort or forced to play outdoors with their friends because their common nature is that they will not be satisfied sitting in one area doing nothing. For example, in my neighbors' house, they have a rule that the use of the Internet is only allowed for 30 minutes everyday and 1 hour during weekend, and their children visit the park after their usage of the Internet as their request.
In conclusion, it is true that the generation of the 21st century do not have good social skills because of the overconsumption of the Internet and this problem could be solved if parents will impose a strict rule on how long Internet could be used by their offsprings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and parents should limit the use of the Internet in order to encourage interacti...
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Line 7, column 503, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...Internet is only allowed for 30 minutes everyday and 1 hour during weekend, and their ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89180327869 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55717947955 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511475409836 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1214647999 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188410205557 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861549402461 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617241984591 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138469094662 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465892073923 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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