Many people believe that the increasing gap between rich and poor people has a negative impact on society. What are the reasons for rising inequality and what problems could it cause?
It is observed that the gap between the rich and the poor stands out these days. There are several reasons why this phenomenon occurs, and also there are some problems from this issue.
To begin with, there are two prime reasons why economical inequality gets serious. First and foremost, the richer group has more opportunity to earn their own money than the poorer group has. This is because rich people are able to afford their investment or new business which can be the resources of pursuing wealth. This in turn leads them to enhance their self-abilities and skills which helps them to make money easier than the poor. In addition, the two groups face different starting points. In other words, people who are going through poverty, for example, cannot acquire a high level of education because it requires a huge amount of money that they could not afford. As a result, not only do the poor keep working with limited ability but also they will not have a better job with a high income.
Consequently, there are severe problems can be found. Firstly, the gap between rich and poor people will be settled deeply in our society. Considering the fact that the rich make more money and the poor make less money according to economic hierarchy, social imbalance will occur such as undeveloped housing issues . Secondly, the obvious problem will be shown in the school. By admitting into the elementary school, the kids from poor family are likely to suffer from bullying due to the poverty.
In conclusion, more opportunities to access education and business that the rich have trigger inequality worse. I believe that there are serious problems that we have to solve remain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80350877193 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30466760445 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 285.0 20.2975951904 1404% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1369.0 106.682146367 1283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 285.0 20.7667163134 1372% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 159.0 7.06120827912 2252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207999763996 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207999763996 0.084324248473 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125104898463 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023380493662 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 143.7 13.0946893788 1097% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -209.34 50.2224549098 -417% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 113.3 11.3001002004 1003% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.04 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.88 8.58950901804 243% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 116.0 10.1190380762 1146% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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