Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes.
It is true that global tourism has a negative impact on destination resorts and some countries. There are a variety of reasons for this, but steps can be taken to tackle the problem.
In my opinion, three main factors are to blame for the unfriendly attitude towards foreign visitors. Firstly, tourists have an adverse impact on local customs and indigenous practices, which is presented by being too rowdy at public space or wearing unsuitable clothes. As a result, young native people may be exposed an undesirable influence, which can make them curious and try to copy these visitors. Secondly, the spread of tourism can put pressure on the natural environment because some tourists may throw or litter garbage into the streets and rivers. Moreover, due to an increase needs of accommodation, a lot of beautiful beaches are spoiled by the building of hotels.
These problems can certainly be improved in order to change the negative belief of the public. The change must start with the authority, who should enforce a strict regulation on tourism activities such as a heavy fine on littering garbage into the inappropriate place. Also, more programmes which aim to introduce local traditions to visitors must be enhanced. For example, tourist guide should suggest foreigners to rent traditional clothes such as ao dai to take a photo and give them some historic places of the country. At the same time, economic benefits have to be more widely promoted by different means of media, so that local people can realize the importance of the tourism industry in creating employment in services like accommodation, transport and entertainment.
In conclusion, international tourism will face a negative prospective from local people if authorities and tourist operator set clear rules to demonstrate the right attitude.
- Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Schools should not force children to learn a foreignlanguage. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 61
- The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumption 77
- The best way to resolve the international environmental problems is toincrease the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21160409556 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88298345678 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634812286689 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3126754283 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147091355256 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507787465386 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386077932983 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10204981123 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037173890029 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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