Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes.
In many people’s thought, foreign tourists are caused of harmful effects on their country but in reality, all the problems could be solved by the effective ways then help the native have more little faith in international tourism.
On the one hand, it still has some serious matters we need to discuss international tourism. Firstly, it may have an adverse impact on traditional customs and indigenous practices because tourists maybe insensitive towards the feelings of residents. It can be seen mostly in local festivals or special events where many habits and customs are set up which forced every people who want to be get involved must abide and respect them. And in some cases, it will lead to a bit confusing or even worse, a misunderstanding because of the difference in traditional and behaviour ways of life.
Secondly, tourists often pollute beautiful spots and several famous beaches. In fact, it’s not only a big problem with international tourism but also is the hard thing we need to cope with local ones. However, it can’t be denied that part of foreigners who travel to other countries have such bad behaviour when they through rubbish everywhere they go. They don’t have a positive attitude or any awareness about protecting the environment so it’s the main reason why those tourists leave very bad images in the thought of native residents.
On the other hand, as I said above, every problem could be deal with solutions relatively. The world has been flat for almost 50 years so each and every single country around the world always find a way to improving and fostering global and regional integration. That’s why we need international tourism, it is one of the fields which can bring the biggest amount of money and other benefits for the development of a country. Besides, we can give out some solutions to keep things in line. Firstly, tourist agencies should urge visitors to respect the local customs and culture of their hosts. Secondly, a body such as the World Tourism Organization must enforce strict regulations on the tourism industry to keep protecting its environment and sustainable growth in general.
In conclusion, although we still have to face with lots of big matters about the tourism in general and international tourism specifically but altogether, we can raise the awareness and deal with problems by some effective solutions as much as we can.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, in conclusion, in fact, in general, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11528822055 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82877576867 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0565735795 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5625 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182987771577 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056280916892 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412371868975 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10245585055 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329188614847 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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