Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons.
Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion
Many people say students should stay in the dormitory for their benefits during semesters but others show their disagreements for some reasons. However, the issue never going to be easy and arguments always be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding view.
On the one hand, living in the dorm will help students save moving time, especially on occasions when the schedules are tight. For example, if you’re living in boarding school then you will go to class much easier than living in your own house, you wouldn’t mind about traffic jams or wake up on time to catch a bus, or even some troubles would have happened when riding on the road. Besides, stay in the dormitory will improve the relationships with your friends, you will learn to live in harmony together and help each other in need.
By contrast, opposite views point out some disadvantages of living in boarding school. These range from lack of private area, limited spaces for living and studying, to some minor nonsense arguments with your roommates sometimes. Examples can be seen in some situations like the schedules between you and your friends are different, hence it would cause some disagreements in extra activities. In addition, live together means you have to share your spaces with at least 7 other people in just a small room. This is also the reason which caused anybody who decided to stay in boarding school much uncomfortable sense of feelings.
In conclusion, it would appear that to choose to stay inside or outside school totally should be based on the preference of students, as well as their family circumstances. Each option has its advantages and disadvantages, hence whatever they choose, it better be served their targets well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, then, well, at least, even so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96621621622 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59476174856 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618243243243 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3906090115 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227832939379 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787183686968 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563991896831 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13011753848 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620500934512 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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