Adventures have been progressively popular in recent years. Many people are putting their life at risk and want to explore their abilities with doing adventures including hang-gliding, mountain climbing. In this essay, I will discuss the reason why people want to risk their lives and I also give my opinion on why it is a good trend.
One major factor that motivates people to do these activities is they want to possess fame. Many people believe that doing adventures tend to get the attention of relatives, society, and even from the media. To illustrate, one month ago, one of the Nepalese team including 5 people have climbed Mount Ketu located in Pakistan in order to create a world record.
Another major reason that has been leveled in media is to show the abilities that they possess. However, people always want to show their skill, it is likely that they do not have time to show. As a result, they would do these kinds of activities when gets oppertunities. For example, one friend has a dream to go to Mount Annapurna basecamp. He was unable to go due to a lack of leisure time. However, he able to manage and he went with his wife and they succeeded in their climbing on Annapurna.
To conclude, Although it is extremely dangerous for lives and health sometimes doing such activities, the volume of people has been growing. In my opinion, adventures are better to show their abilities and it makes proud you in societies and for your country somehow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7578125 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5834580258 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55859375 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.079883907 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32269160075 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985121533028 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810313377238 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192783509932 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073476409714 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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