Many people nowadays see a counselor or therapist to improve their mental health. Some feel, however, that this is unnecessary. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
People, in this day and age, consider that their mental health can be improved significantly by a counselor or therapist; meanwhile, others reject this belief and assume this is inessential after all. In this essay, both points of view will be examined and I will give my opinion afterward.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that hiring a counselor or therapist is highly recommend. People believe this as they could share the burdens of emotions and thus improve a person’s mental health. Long-seated issues can make people feel anxious or depressed; therefore, a therapist can listen to confessions and give useful advice. People then would feel relive, gain benefits such as being more active, feeling more optimistic as well as well sleeping. Another advantage of this kind of therapy is that it would improve communication skills as well as broaden a person’s horizon. Frequent face-to-face conversations enable people to talk more fluently and find it easy to speak up their mind. Moreover, when listening to another perspective in solving a problem would enlarge more knowledge as well.
On the other hand, people assert this is a waste of time since people can improve their mental health themselves. People believe this because they think this would cost a lot of time, money, and endeavor. Undoubtedly, hiring a counselor for an hour is expensive; furthermore, numerous hours will be used for talking with a stranger and sometimes this makes people feel uncomfortable and can not speak. Therefore, it would take a lot of time for this to be completed. Moreover, people feel that they can find ways to improve their mental health since they have beloved ones who are always ready to give them advises or they can just listen to healing music or doing their hobbies to forget the pain and feel at ease.
In conclusion, both sides have merits. On balance, I, however, tend to believe that mental problems can only be solved by ourselves so there is no need to hire a counselor or therapist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'recommended'.
Suggestion: recommended
...ring a counselor or therapist is highly recommend. People believe this as they could shar...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'as well'.
Suggestion: as well
...ng more active, feeling more optimistic as well as well sleeping. Another advantage of this kin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, after all, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9703264095 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7010075042 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3906606301 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312500113381 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107270408339 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614126205804 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198812751539 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457846108907 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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