many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircut and beauty products to enhance outer appearance. Some people think that is good way to spend money, while others think that there is better way to spend it. Discuss both and give your opinion
Civilization creeped in, thereby demanding people to be flawless. Hence, a majority of individuals spend lavishly on clothes, haircut and beauty products to improve their looks. Thus, arose a disparity in opinion, whereby, some feel that this expenditure is genuine while others think that money can be driven elsewhere to be used efficiently. However, I concur, with the second statement and so believe that it should be spent effectively. This essay will discuss reasons for this discrepancy in views.
Sadly, unaware of the saying that goes “anything in excess is poison”. Individuals spend more and more money on perishable things. Although, this century demands for good outfit and trendy hairstyles for fame and recognition, it hardly gives us happiness over a long run. Undoubtedly, spending money raises our standards and imparts certain level of confidence and security. Additionally, it is absolutely fine to pamper ourselves occasionally but putting money on things that fades away is useless.
Most important thing is behaviour and inner beauty and not prettiness of face. Spending a lot on beautifying products can be deleterious. There are examples, where people even lost their on attempting to be like someone whom they considered pretty. Finally, at the end pockets will be empty so the soul.
In contrast, money spent on nutritious food, exercise and other activities like travelling is the best invitation for beauty. A healthy body lights up from within and renders glow to the face, this glow is better than the artificial blush, of course. Money utilized on exercise and nutritious food support our health, reduces wrinkles and keep us young and active over years unlike beauty products, that are short lasting with harmful effects.
To conclude, spending bounty of money to gather sadness at old age is foolishness and should be utilized effectively to earn happiness of healthy and young body.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, look, second, so, thus, while, in contrast, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3660130719 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84380579624 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8035298391 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249794187441 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683281235214 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592899359283 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121442811768 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04368021322 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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