Many products that we buy are made in other countries.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion
It is generally believed that a lot of goods we consume are made in other countries. This could create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks.
It is said that products made in the foreign have some noteworthy positive effects. Chief of these is that since in some countries, their infrastructure condition is better than the others that lead to lots of goods are made from here. For example, the percentage of citizens in the developed country tending to consume the products in other countries for its quality is extremely high, because they want to find a product which has a good price and quality or maybe they buy owning to its advertisement. Add to this is the fact that using these products can enhance the trade with international organizations so that it can improve the economy of the country and also help people have a quality product in their life.
Despite these attractions, several drawbacks do exist. One of the biggest disadvantages is that the local market or businesses inside the country cannot compete with the international organizations. This might be explained by the fact that individuals spend most of their money on products from an outside country that can result in the falling down of small businesses. For instance, some small grocery wants to compete with others but their product is not good enough and the cost may be too high so this makes people usually choose the goods made in other countries.
In conclusion, this issue obviously can help increase the economy of the country but on the other hand, it also has some negative effects that can harm to products in the inside country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 472, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
... a good price and quality or maybe they buy owning to its advertisement. Add to thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86071428571 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67379335745 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6054778528 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.727272727 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258182748201 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960317175038 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456444700294 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158479602534 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325113074755 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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