Many products that people buy are made in other countries.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion.
Plethora brands are purchased by people which produce from other regions due to the high quality. Nonetheless, it is considered that products can eliminate local manufactures as the drawback.
Granted, having high excellence commodities come from overseas is the main impact for encouraging buyers, and this leads to help the economy of receiver countries. This is because some products in overseas are processed with the sophisticated technology, and when the exporter countries want to sell their brands, they would be charged by the host nation with some funds. To illustrate, around 60% Indonesians’ choose to use iPhone from U.S as their smartphone due to the high resolution of camera which consist of 13-mega pixel with the light setting, and each that company exports to Indonesia has the tax around Rp. 500,000 per item. Therefore, I believe that products will bring users more comfortable to use it.
On the other hands, the origin manufactures cannot compete with the competitors from other countries, making them less well-known among costumers. Since exporters expend their products in other countries, buyers prefer to choose the popular ones which come form overseas, and also the lack of promotion by local products cause of a slight purchasers to select this one. According to Ministry of Industry Indonesia, there are around 70% Indonesians’ keen on iPhone, if compared with Advance which is the local product, buyers are more satisfy to use the first one because they promotes their brand through YouTube platform, having details of features like cameras and sounds. Instead of seeing promotion, the buyers should determine products based one their needs.
To sum up, I assure that brands coming from overseas consist of high value, but this will make foreign brands less of buyers. Where possible, if the authorities in some countries provide local brands which can compete with overseas and make buyers comfortable and suitable to use that one.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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...ndonesians’ choose to use iPhone from U.S as their smartphone due to the high res...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'purchaser'?
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'promote'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3025477707 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67034940672 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7960195837 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112502458053 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479020187205 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278639001075 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747306316915 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233832928812 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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