Many societies have their own homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
some people believe that giving money to homeless people is the superb way to support them. To a certain extent,I agree that provide them with money may help these people to formalize their life again in better way. However, I also believe that we should ensure them with some places for living.
On the one hand,I accept that it is important to lend a hand to homeless people and giving money is one of effective ways. people who did not own any place to live have trouble with other critical needs such as finding food and getting close. The climates and weather conditions are also main factors which complicated life of these individuals. To illustrate,someone living in streets, wearing tattered clothes and suffering from starvation faces harder difficulties in winter. Without money support, miserable people wouldn't be able to cope with their problems.
On the other hand, I believe that helping these people to obtain a place for living and to get a job for earning some money would be more supportive. streets are home for also other creatures which can be cause for threats. At any part of a day, people living outside may face a lot of dangers. For instance, specially at nights, street animals,criminals are the main causes for their laceration,rape, kidnapping and death. İf we don't help them to be saved from these menaces,this can lead to serious disturbances for humanity.
In conclusion, although I accept that we giving money to homeless people is workable,I also believe that providing them with living places is the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95402298851 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74686191195 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4811253537 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3571428571 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276304446912 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106587231527 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107072688051 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20632362272 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112406784275 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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