Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
some people believe that it's reasonable successful sports professionals can earn more money than people in other important professions. To a certain extent,I agree that prosperous athletes should get good deal of money. However, I also believe that people who work in other crucial fields deserve more salary.
On the one hand, sport professionals merit a lot of earnings. if we consider what they've been going through then it'll be clear for us why they get a chance to earn a great amount of money. people specialized in certain kind of sports have to dedicate her life to sport.For example,they train a lot when we sleep, they should be going on a diet when we eat whatever we want. Without a high return their efforts wouldn't be able to be compensated.
On the other hand,I believe that other professionals who have more crucial employments deserve adequate salary as well . There are some professions involving computer technologies,natural and medical sciences, agricultural sciences, astronomy and some others are counted the main bases of our daily life and it is hard to imagine our existence and also getting master at all of these underlined things require many attempts. For instance, it's the known fact that since we want to be academic, scientist or a professional doctor we have to spend a big part of our lives to achieve it. if their exertion wasn't appreciated enough this could lead to decline in academic fields.
In conclusion, although I accept that sports professionals should earn much money,I also believe that people who are in other important professions have to be esteemed sufficiently, too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05970149254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95189758773 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608208955224 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9850410137 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308988409962 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119316772726 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135384501309 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214279131194 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1546101488 0.056905535591 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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