Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience.
Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?
There are those who believe that taking some time between school and university in order to visit new countries or work can be an unjustifiable waste of time. In my opinion, the idea of taking a pause in the process of education is reasonable because students can obtain more conscious approach towards their future path in studying and profession.
The argument against usefullness of a gap year is that teenagers can loose their time without any positive outcomes. A lot of their parents are also anxious about how children would spend their time. They are afraid that after an educational pause students can decide not going to unvisersity at all. A lot of researches demonstrate same result: there are approximately 10 percent of students who left their education after a gap year taken after school. Thus, there are still a lot of worrying about how students spend their time during a break they can take.
Hovewer, taking a pause in order to travel or work could be a fascinating solution for some students. Since a lot of them feel pressure from their parents and acqueintaincies, they simly does not have enought time to think about their future goals and desires. Taking a gap year can help them to gain the more precise understanding of what they want to do in their future. This picture can significantly affect the choice of universities and following profession. According to the research results of a World Educational Organization, approximately half of the students felt stressed about their university decision at least once. That means, that having less pressure during a gap year will allow students to choose furute more carefully and consciously.
In conclusion, although that some people still believe that a gap year is an unsuful and time-consuming decision, for some students this pause can be vital because it will make their choice of profession and university more conscious.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, thus, at least, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04113924051 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84122059151 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512658227848 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6038778609 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.785714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244758681248 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914248489147 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418182407313 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160784024646 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411577237032 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.