Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situation?
It is true that besides some university students can stay at home with their families, some others have to stay far away from home to pursue their education. The two different trends of this issue bring both benefits and difficulties.
On one hand, by living with family, the student can help his family with reducing financial burden. Studying in other place means that this student has to spend a lot of money in living cost, such as renting, meals, transportation,... which can be reduced if taking advantage from family. Furthermore, the student will be watched carefully if he stays closely with his family. They can keep an eye on him, then easily control and deal if he gots any trouble. On another hand, the student who lives with family is easily to be distracted from studying due to family activities.
Meanwhile, living far away from home gives that student chance to become mature by making decision by himself or living dependently. Moreover, by spending costs in a limited budget, he can learn how to manage the financial resources quickly. However, when having difficulties in life, it can be more seriously as that student is not able to get support from his parent in time.
In conclusion, studying near home or far away from home either leads to advantages and disadvantages. So that, the choice depends on that student's wish and condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
..., such as renting, meals, transportation,... which can be reduced if taking advant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92640692641 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69789023501 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7050590396 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324124884841 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102830496551 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851307706994 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193388258877 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07211530827 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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