In modern society, many women opt to have a baby later than they did in the past. Although many issues relating to baby development and the attitude of family members would affect their choice, I believe that the advantages would be greater.
In terms of reproductive health, having a child lately could have an impact on children’s recognition in the future. The prospects that children have abnormalities in brain growth will rise. For example, women who are thirty-five years old or older when they become pregnant are more likely to have a pregnancy affected by Down syndrome than women who become pregnant at a younger age. Moreover, family members might put pressure on women to give birth to a baby soon. The worry of them makes women feel stressed.
To have a baby later in life is considered as a reasonable decision for modern women. First, some women are not ready to become pregnant since the financial conditions at the present time do not provide enough money to raise a child with comprehensive development. A lack of mental preparation makes them not to be confident to become a mom. Second, they think that they are still at young ages and this is the appropriate point of time to get high promotion in jobs. Therefore, to not to miss the chance, they decide to concentrate on working. Having a baby means that they get distraction from caring for them, the time for work is gradually limited. On the other hand, couples do not want to have another person like a babysitter to look after their kids.
In conclusion, I believe that once women prepare in a meticulous way about finance, time and are ready to become pregnant, the baby will be raised in the best condition.
- Nowadays many people cannot read or write What problems does this cause What measures can governments take to solve these problems 56
- Pollution of rivers lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment What are the possible causes of water pollution and what effects does this have on animal life and human society 84
- The graph below shows the production levels of main fuels in a European country from 1981 to 2000 20
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 78
- People say that it is a waste of time for highschool students to learn literature such as novels and poems Do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...in growth will rise. For example, women who are thirty-five years old or older when the...
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Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a meticulous way" with adverb for "meticulous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sion, I believe that once women prepare in a meticulous way about finance, time and are ready to be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73898305085 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6281703745 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3126104296 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226822662806 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759231260929 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603895828536 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126856058488 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548859163191 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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