Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
It is argued that workers are often inactive, both during the workday and in their free time, and this will impact these people's health. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons why so many working people do not exercise enough and how to solve this problem.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why workers do not get enough exercise. Firstly, the working people must work really hard, and so they do have not enough leisure time. As they have no time to rest, they will not have enough time to do exercise. Secondly, some workers tend to put in extra hours to meet up with targets and achieve goals. Therefore, they will ignore the importance of doing exercises, and this will affect their health. For example, my uncle is a worker, he only focuses on his work and refuses to exercise and this will influent his health such as obesity and blood pressure.
On the other hand, there are some ways to solve this problem. To begin with, workers should establish a schedule in order to have more free time during the week. this will make their health become better and better. For instance, my father often establishes his schedule that has more free time, so he will have time to do exercise and this makes his health improve.
In conclusion, workers tend to not exercise because of their hard work, it seems to me that they should take breaks while working in order to help them improve their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62450592885 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09887005575 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505928853755 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9731984388 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402643861925 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151412003488 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102071802261 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26555862443 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872501575428 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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