many young people now know more about international pop and movie stars then famous people in the history of their countries. What are the causes ? give solution to increase the number of people to know about famous people in history.
In this contemporary era, famous people of the history are not well known by the new generation of their country while they prefer international pops and cinema artists. This essay will articulate some of its causes such as a vast use of internet facilities and busy lifestyle and propose some solution to alleviate this.
To commence with, in the modern era, the young people are less likely aware about famous historians of their countries because of the trend of social media and internet facilities. In other words, the younger generation now prefer more use of social media apps which affects them huge. Famous pops and the stars are more active on internet so they are more liked by young ones. For example, teenagers now influenced by these pops and they followed their life aspects as well as. However, which makes them aware of famous people in the history who did the terrific jobs in their lifetime for their nation.
Furthermore, there are abundant of causes which affects young people nowadays immensely. One of them is busy schedule of parents and guardians who don't pay attention on their kids to throw a light on our history. To elaborate it, in this globalised world guardians are undoubtedly had more responsibilities because of high dwelling. They had not enough time for their young ones. To instance, a report of "Time of India" shows that 64% of the both parents are office going by leaving their children's at home alone. Thus, it makes young ones to follow modern aesthetic and famous stars yet the history.
To conclude, with a plethora of a causes, there are many solutions for this problem also. From my perspective, eventhough it is the duty of a Government to enhance the level of awareness of history or famous historians which is responsible for our freedom in schools. Secondly, parents are also equally likely responsible to emphasis or enforce their childrens to know about our real heroes not reel heroes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95440729483 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61790897469 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5744104532 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328463641753 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998214700105 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787396773076 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185591953143 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673720970725 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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