Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past.
Why is this case?
Is it positive or negative development?
One of the most discussed issues nowadays is that people today have bigger weddings than in the past and spend on them huge amount of money. In my opinion, the reason to this is that couples want to show their happiness and wealth to other people and it is negative development as it leads to tension between spouses and loan burden in the future.
Firstly, it must be admitted that when a couple prepares for wedding they want to show other people that they rich and lover each other. In other words, they tend to rent the most expensive restaurant and invite all friends, classmates and colleagues to their wedding party. In addition they buy expensive clothes and serve tables with expensive dishes. All this can show their wealth and means that they could succeed in their life as they can afford all it. Moreover, they hire the most expensive photographers, as they want to have beautiful photographs from their weddings in order to share them in the web. As a result, all people will be informed that they had pompous wedding and they are reach.
One serious problem that can arise from having big and expensive weddings is that people have to spend last money on wedding parties and even more some of them take loans from banks. As a result, after wedding day people do not have enough money and have to pay back their loans. Furthermore, the cannot afford to have honeymoon or to buy their own apartments. Consequently, spouses struggle and suffer in order to pay back their loans, as a result, tension between spouses become higher and higher. Consequently, many people cannot survive in such conditions and get divorced.
In conclusion, although people can show that they are successful via wedding, I consider that people may face many problems due to lack of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...d colleagues to their wedding party. In addition they buy expensive clothes and serve ta...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'honeymooned'.
Suggestion: honeymooned
... Furthermore, the cannot afford to have honeymoon or to buy their own apartments. Consequ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77022653722 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40199660005 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504854368932 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3036338661 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.091893527065 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357180289513 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473441872173 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065638929586 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735789702414 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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