Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that there is no more sexes difference in various duties. Some people concur that male and female cannot share the equal liability. However, I quibble from them and propound that nowadays both men and women have same responsibilities and it might lead to fruitful results. In this essay I will be cited light on the concept of different works at home and daily life routine for male and female.
Adequate evidences are obtainable to substantiate the concept of work similarities. The top-notch concrete reason is that today men and women works together at one platform without any gender imparity. Another rational reason which hauls me to patron is that education plays an important role because nawadays boys and girls are understand each other thinking and also participates in various events without any restrictions. The rearmost coherent factor which cannot neglected is that parents become aware and they allow their children to do work which they like. To uphold my notion I would like to cite an instance of men and women who are doing job in different fields. Such as Male work as a cook and female work as soldier and many more jobs which shows work likeness.
What is half full for some, may appear half empty to others. So, public in general tend to distinguishing that men and women can never participate in their duties which has multiple reasons. To commence with, many people still follow old beliefs and they not accept this trend. In addition, nevertheless most public are educated, they give priority to their ego. As a result we can be seen this dissimilarity in many regions of india.
All in All, I reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supporting there is no more sexes difference in work responsibilities. Consequently, I firmly disagree with this statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: understood
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cated, they give priority to their ego. As a result we can be seen this dissimilar...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in work responsibilities. Consequently, I firmly disagree with this statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, in addition, in general, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00647249191 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76107735141 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618122977346 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3298534226 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152930450229 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433004105167 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455368358178 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826716514594 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291571299851 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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