Modern technology is changing our world This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures To what extent agree or disagree
For a long time, modern technology has been a controversial topic. Some people believe that modernisation can bring certain benefits. Nevertheless, other groups believe that it can have some drawbacks, and I strongly disagree with that assertion. In this essay, I will discuss two views on this issue.
Using smart devices, for instance, it is possible to connect with people around the world without leaving our homes. Besides, technology has always been a very crucial part of human existence. In addition, it contributes to the development of human society. By using modern technology such as a laptop, mobile phone and computer. For example, during the COVID-19 pandemic, people had to use smart devices to work and to keep in touch with each other.
On the other hand, we can keep interacting together and reap a lot of benefits. But the disadvantages can also have a dramatic impact on humanity. In addition, some people overuse high-tech items so they can become more lazy day by day. In addition, everyone can feel more shy or frightened by real life. For example, people who just stay at home and live with their own technology item, they will lack social skills and traditional culture will be lost as well.
To summarise, the world becomes modernisation or industrialisation. There are always pros and cons to everything. To develop our world and ourselves, however, we need a balance between real life and virtual life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07983193277 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87615093342 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.2200487153 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3571428571 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183999344015 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568803491331 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459551162164 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100555548505 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186731590739 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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