Undoubtedly, in this contemporary epoch, technology had made an immense growth in all the arenas since few decades. It has become facile for everyone to share and access information. Nevertheless, many individuals are confronting a lot of detrimental issues owing to this .I totally agree with the notion and would shed light on the valid views in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, it is undeniable that with the advancement in technology, all the information can be gathered or shared within seconds. Firstly, anyone can access information regarding anything from anywhere. With the help of internet, individuals can access any information without any restrictions even with their hand held devices like smart phones. For instance, a survey conducted by BBC states that in the year 2019 more than 80 percent of teenagers in India are exposed to inappropriate or restricted websites like pornography and bomb making. Thus result in causing adverse danger to the younger generations.
Secondly , technology has grown to such an extent that all the information regarding the individuals are interlinked like their personal profiles, phone numbers, email identity and their bank account details. As a result cyber crimes has increased in the past few decades. To exemplify, an article in “The Hindu” a leading magazine in India states that details like bank account from personal computers or phone are being hacked by criminals and many have lost their belongings. Therefore, the exchange of information has invited criminals to miss use technology in this modern world.
To conclude, It is obvious that development in technology has its own significance, nothing cannot be ignored .Although technology benefits the humans in all facets of life , yet it has innumerable adverse consequences to every individuals and their societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47386759582 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04415685561 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2261168283 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169178697655 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599007142342 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474541064841 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924887341015 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229438050884 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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