In modern times, people are under more stress than ever. This has a negative impact on their well-being.
State some of the causes and suggest possible solutions
It is true that many people feel more stress nowadays than they used to, and this is leading to a general decline in people's mental health. While this is a serious problem, it can be solved by taking up a hobby.
The main cause of stress is that society is highly competitive and people are under intense pressure to succeed. The unstable job market has contributed to making people think that they will lose their jobs if they cannot compete. Furthermore, society demands constant self-development in order to remain successful. As a result, people experience a high degree of tension and pressure at work, which has an extremely negative effect on their health. In fact, in a recent survey conducted on workers in Korea, over 70 percent of those questioned stated that they are under intense emotional strain because of the social pressure to remain competitive.
However, there are solutions to this problem. One of the ways to deal with stress is to find a hobby that allows one to forget the pressures one faces in professional life. A recreational activity can help people stop thinking about their worries and unwind. In addition, doing activities with friends can be a particularly effective means of alleviating work-related stress. For example, biking clubs have recently become extremely popular in Seoul. People who join them claim that cycling with a group of like-minded people helps to revitalize them both physically and mentally. The positive energy they generate from this hobby helps them cope with work-related anxiety.
To sum up, it is clear that intense pressure to succeed is generating high levels of stress, which is harmful to people's health. Nevertheless, the issue can be resolved by finding a hobby one can enjoy.
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- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in addition, in fact, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04498269896 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74828065146 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598615916955 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7145256688 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21326933326 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683715662999 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502563317243 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128451475424 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044247402171 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.