More and more business and individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating
Nowadays, with the development of technology, communicating via the internet plays an integral part in the modern life. There is a increase in using the advanced technology to communicate instead of talking directly with other people. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of this method.
To begin with, there are some positive influences of choosing technology for communicating. First and foremost, it is time-saving for people to interact with friends, colleagues and other relationships. It is clearly seen that this method accelerates the flow of information between two distances. For example, people who live far from their home can keep in touch with their families by making a call or sending an email which accounts for a few minutes rather than posting a letter which make up several days as previously. Moreover, interacting via the internet helps people save a huge amount of money. For instance, thanks to advanced technology such as smart phone, wifi or 3G, people can communicate with other people all over the world at no cost. They even see each other by using some social network sites like Facebook, Skype or Viber.
On the other hand, this way of communication has some drawbacks. Firstly, it makes the downfall of direct communication in society. The fact shows that communicating via the internet create a decrease in interacting between people, therefore, it is difficult to build a strong relationship since internet is only a virtual life. In addition, the information which is posted in the internet is out of control and not be examined thoroughly, people can be cheated and this will create some negative impacts on residents' lives.
In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages which communicating via the internet brings for human, I strongly believe that this method of interaction will be trend in the modern life provided that people use of its benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16774193548 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92201803315 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7184738383 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189326868878 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684559363907 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517458360247 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127359241757 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230339652241 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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