More and more business and individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.
The tendency of utilizing E-communication is increasingly prevalent among individuals and many organizations due to the advanced technology. In my opinion, while the availability of technology is beneficial to distance communication, the reduced real interaction, however, contributes to its drawback.
It is true that advanced technology nowadays facilitates people by the convenience of distance communication. People, who live far from their friends and relatives, could take advantage of online applications such as Skype or Viber to strike up a conversation with them as long as the Internet is stabilized. In terms of businesses, online communication also benefits cooperation between working members. Regardless of geographical barriers, colleagues and managers could operate a private meeting at home instead of driving directly to the conference room, which often takes a lot of time and effort.
Apart from the benefits of E-communication expressed above, the drawback can even be damaging because of the reduced real interaction among humans. Individuals, who spend a relatively large amount of time on online chat rooms, are more likely to forgo constant stimulation, which could be gained by actively talking to their friends in reality. This existence has the result of isolating and discouraging real interaction in people’s lives. For example, youngsters choose to make friends online rather than mixing with their peers in the real world, and these virtual relationships are substituted for real friendships.
In conclusion, technology has revolutionized communication between people and businesses. Although it is beneficial towards people living in remote locations as well as businesses, the reduce human interaction in the real world would have an adverse effect on people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 182, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...remote locations as well as businesses, the reduce human interaction in the real world wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82330827068 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38568222673 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9648282869 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123894890552 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448726006647 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036114177359 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694158389047 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229687586597 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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