More and more people are relying on the Internet as their major source of news and information.
What advantages does the Internet have for the average person? What disadvantages could it have now or in the future?
Nowadays, in the context of growing social and growing technology, the Internet is more and more becoming an integral part of the human life.
Firstly, the most significant role of Internet for average person is information. The Internet is a enormos depository of data. The whole thing can be found in there. That's the useful way to update the news, to work, to study, or even to cure. Now, life becomes more convenient than ever.
Secondly, the Internet connects numerous folks all over the world. We can converse with someone is thousand of kilometers distant. We can strike up a friendship with someone we have never met. We can have a face to face talk with anyone in the world. Internet created the closer world.
Thirdly, the Internet provides a great number of expedience services. One of that is the online purchase service. We can buy anything when we just stay at home. Thereby, now the life is more pleasant through Internet's entertainment. We can watch movies, listen to music, play games, etc, that's not costly and complicated as before.
However, everything has two sides, hence Internet also has some weakness. The most dangerous problem is viruses. Through Internet, many viruses can penetrate personal computers, mobiles, and even the spacious server system. Consequently, personal information and confidential information was leak out. That's so hazardous with Internet users.
Also, not all of the information on Internet are factual and wholesome. Internet users need to select the right by themselves.
In conclusion, the Internet progressively demonstrates its vital position, modern life can not be without it. And importantly, it is advantageous or disadvantageous depends on you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... person is information. The Internet is a enormos depository of data. The whole t...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... The whole thing can be found in there. Thats the useful way to update the news, to w...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
... world. We can converse with someone is thousand of kilometers distant. We can strike up...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...endship with someone we have never met. We can have a face to face talk with anyon...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...vies, listen to music, play games, etc, thats not costly and complicated as before. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... confidential information was leak out. Thats so hazardous with Internet users. A...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...dous with Internet users. Also, not all of the information on Internet are factual and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28832116788 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90479081625 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6241760843 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.96 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.96 20.7667163134 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.28 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251614407695 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677792973184 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568643116111 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121281867841 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042168383675 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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