More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation.
Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
Nowadays people are depending upon own car rather than using a public transportation, because of that now we are able to see in a population city having congestion of roads. This essay will examine the main causes of using private car and possible solution for the traffic congestion and pollution.
The main problems will occur by using private cars is traffic congestion, air and sound pollution. When humans people started buying cars for their own and roads are not extended, because in the metro city there is no space to extend. Everyone going to office by their own cars like in a cars they are traveling miles alone and everyone doing the same then there is no space on the road and it will be congestion . For example, New York in US and Bangalore in India is the one of the developed and fastest city in the world and every IT employee will travel in peak time to office and experienced a traffic congestion. This could result into air and sound pollution to the nearest neighbours. Furthermore, in the peak time itself it is recorded maximum number of air and sound pollution because of that it could harm the patient in the hospitals in the city.
Some possible solution to this problems are that the people need to use public transport and car pooling while going to office. By using the public transport, there would be low-cost for them and the time taken travel to destination in the peak time also less compared to when using<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="using "></span> own cars. Despite waiting in traffic for a long time, people need to start using car pooling method and it is the one of the efficient way in order to reduce the pollution in the city. Otherwise people need to use electric vehicle rather than that fuel cars. For instance, Bangalore is the one the city using car pooling and survey conducted by the government and the result enormously difference by 40 % of people are using car pooling in 2018 when compared to only 5% are using in 2014.
To conclude, using of private cars in the peak time by the people and it leads to traffic blocks and the pollution in the city. However, we can significantly lessen the congestion of traffic during peak hours by using public transportation and car polling will cut the amount pollution in the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97786027053 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6769852075 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.533333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173953673032 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769690684503 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523603912287 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121320256635 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0078276523875 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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