More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?
Keeping abreast of happenings through the Internet is preferable to through the news programs for many people. Although there are some concerns regarding the credibility of the news, I believe that it’s overall a positive thing.
The accuracy of the news on the Internet is not trustworthy. There are myriad sensationalist news as those can gain high profile, pulling in money for the authors of such shocking news. Furthermore, in virtue of the nature of the Internet, any netizen can write an article reporting an untrue incident to undermine the reputation of someone, making cyberbullying easier as people can spread misleading accounts about the victim. For example, false scandals have blemished various celebrities' image. However, with the astronomical number of news organizations on the Internet, finding a reliable source to provide accurate descriptions is not problematic.
The unrestrained news is the salient benefit of the information on the Internet. News organizations confine some issues as they may damage their reputation or as requested by the government, hiding the unfair treatment from the public. With the advent of the Internet, people can freely spread the events without paying any money, drawing attention to the problems and discrimination, thus helping resolve the situation. Moreover, the widespreadability of the news on the Internet means that the number of people who can see it is legion, so they can lend a hand to combat such unjust things. For instance, the news about the bondage of women in Iran has gained attention from the whole world and received support from people from multiple countries to fight back against the government.
In conclusion, the unreliability of the news on the Internet is a huge drawback. However, people can easily find trustworthy sources. Moreover, the freedom to voice problems through the Internet without confinement outweighs the demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...There are myriad sensationalist news as those can gain high profile, pulling in money for...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...of someone, making cyberbullying easier as people can spread misleading accounts a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41666666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02458628943 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6629812399 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244217128281 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919200059802 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482586079544 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161149873368 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275705861772 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.