As more and more students enter universities, academic qualifications are becoming devalued. To get ahead in many professions, more than one degree is now required and in future it is likely that people will take a number of degree courses before even starting work. This is an undesirable situation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that an education is the integral part of pupil’s life. These days, more number of student enrolled in the universities to get a number of degree for better future life. I personally believe that, this is a worrying trend for upcoming generation and for universities. This essay will provide evidence in support of this position.
First of all, number of students with equal degree are increased at one place, which will affect universities and upcoming generation. In other words, although there are a limited seats in the universities for particular degree, if educate number raised then it will put a strain on universities. Sometime this will create problems for upcoming students. For instance, in 2005, a London school of management gets difficulty when more number of students enrolled in same degree course. As a result, they had to reduce seats from upcoming batches, to manage more students in one-degree course. Thus, it is clear that universities and upcoming students get affected by present pupils.
In addition to this, people who enter into a number of degree courses start their professional life lately because, we all know that most of the degree course take time to complete. This will become obstacle in starting their profession. For example, a recent study by the UK government showed that people with more degrees often gets difficulty for employment because of their age. So, this example clearly shows that people get problem in employment because they spent more time to get number of degree courses.
In conclusion, I feel that it is not necessary that person needs more number of degree for better future life. However, universities and future generations affected by those pupils who enrolled continuously in degree courses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20833333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76677508433 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538194444444 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4522125544 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328601994335 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1178628904 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813885654304 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212813843648 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042392214487 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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