More big shopping malls are being built and they replace small shops. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is true that a growing number of large-scale shopping centers take over the roles that previously used to be played by small shops. While this trend can be negative to some extent, I would argue that it is more positive.
On the one hand, replacing small shops with bigger ones has several drawbacks. First, because there are few big shopping malls located in a relatively large area, many people have to travel across long distances, which take people more time even to buy few items for their daily consumption such as soaps or instant noodles. If small shops are remained to located around the city, people find it more convenient to buy such items. Second, because of the high cost of operation, prices of the products which consumers buy in shopping centers might be more expensive than the similar ones selling in small shops. As a result, shopping malls are economically unsuitable to serve daily consumed products, which increases citizen’s expenditure.
On the other hand, there are several grounds why big shopping malls benefit citizens. The first one is that the sources and origins of products are seriously checked when they are imported into big shopping malls, which guarantees the quality of the products. If people buy goods in small shops, they might buy fake ones with low quality. Additionally, Shopping centers provide people with a broad spectrum of products such as closes or vegetables. This enables people to buy different items at the same place. Therefore, they can save time and cost of traveling when they need to buy many kinds of products at once.
In conclusion, replacing small shops with bigger ones has several negative impacts, I believe the benefits of this tendency are much greater.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00692041522 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53820321193 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1570559816 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338767586548 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119405133788 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480274518956 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218273535482 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232420805027 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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