Most countries allow 18 years old people to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other people think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, several societies in most nations believe that teenagers who are 18 years old could be permitted to drive private cars, however, others claim that such government’s policy should be revised up to 25. This essay will examine both points of view which I will elucidate more below.
On the one hand, rivals of revising driving regulation under 18 years old claim that teenagers driven by emotional instability are more likely taking risk to engage in delinquent activity. As the insecure adolescent, they frequently commit traffic violence such as illegal car racing which trigger adrenaline hormone only to achieve peer-acceptance.Moreover, crash and traffic offence in novice drivers afflict both victims and families with deep trauma. The 24-year imprisonment of Cameron Harris, 15-year-old street racer, who took two lives of a mother and a baby, never relieve the pain their family has for the entire life.
On the other hand, proponents of this view believe that youth who grows up older to 25 years old commonly takes bigger responsibilities such as taking a dream college. Reported by Urban Institute, nearly 10% American students residing in rural area takes a daily round trip by car to urban city to venture better education quality. Furthermore, private driving practice during teenage years builds the understanding of traffic signs and regulations which sharpen youngster’s driving skills. Exploring new destination in adolescence will avoid all forms of dangers on the road, resulting in both being law-abiding one and extensive driving experience.
In conclusion, in my standpoint, allowing youth to drive petrol-engine vehicles can grasp wider opportunity of career exploration and control driving etiquette in the quarter life. This is as long as the government should put a high attention to youngsters’ driving behaviour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: who is a are
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, as for, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49477351916 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09721409188 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665505226481 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.788099767 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.363636364 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221564695174 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808636067584 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423807070879 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13816254889 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355512863859 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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