It has been suggested that when applying any job, people tend to focus most on salary condition. While I consider there are more factors should be prioritized equal with or rather than the contracted income.
It is agreed that high income and benefit job would attract more applicants as this, in somewhat extent, raise one's lives or even their whole family, for examples, pay for accommodation bills, transportation bills, etc. Additionally, in terms of social life, with a modern gadgets purchased supported by high income, a person could advertises their luxury life with the others through social media, and then their net workings would be expanded which gets them new employment opportunities.
However, beside high salary, I personally take more attention on job satisfaction which affects not only on physical health but also mental health. Firstly, a happy attitude on job would make a working day, which take one third hours everyday, more effective and efficient. That emotion encourages for the creation and renovation in each person then the whole corporation would be better along with their employees. Secondly, for those high pressure positions, keeping a satisfaction would be a key feature to overcome certain overtime hours, tight deadlines and even tough stakeholders. Moreover, relationship with colleges also put a crucial point in one's career strategy. As currently, teamwork isn't the stranger definition with anyone, a perfect teamwork would help the project processing smoothly and recover errors promptly.
In conclusion, the high salary is one of the most important things when anyone thinks of on their career path. But, there are numbers of concerns should be took into account equally in one's consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ants as this, in somewhat extent, raise ones lives or even their whole family, for e...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'gadget'?
Suggestion: gadget
... in terms of social life, with a modern gadgets purchased supported by high income, a p...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'advertise'
Suggestion: advertise
...upported by high income, a person could advertises their luxury life with the others throu...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...working day, which take one third hours everyday, more effective and efficient. That emo...
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Line 5, column 699, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...career strategy. As currently, teamwork isnt the stranger definition with anyone, a ...
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... should be took into account equally in ones consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41391941392 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79883204221 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6853210634 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143909224514 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554642735377 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067091007674 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973936522888 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300735418353 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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