The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Evaluating a heterogeneity of factors when decide which career path or a work to take plays an indispensable role. In terms of this, it is a prevalent belief that earning tremendous wage should be taken in to account initially. This essay will address why I don't stand for this by covering its mental stress and the superficial vision of people considering being well-paid of the utmost importance.
On the one hand, if a person prioritizes getting immense earnings, that one will likely to be mentally stressful. It is elucidated by the fact that higher income is associated with major responsibility and massive expectation from the superior, which put an invisible strain on the employees already working much more laboriously under huger pressure than the ones having nine to five jobs. Furthermore, the lack of time to wind down, owning to the never-ending work, might exacerbate the tension in their minds. Labor-exploiting, however, rewarding-for-the-hard-working societies such as Japan and Korea exemplify these with increasing cases of workers turning depressed or even committing suicides for not fulfilling their duty registered per annum.
On the other hand, some point out that getting paid well could lead to a satisfying life, which however is just the tip of the iceberg. People deeming that way only notice the materialistic values at the time but not how sentimentally unworthy the prosperity is for the affluent class in long term. Worriedly, as I previously stated, the more an individual gets paid, the more time and mind must be spent on the occupation, rather than for the close ones. As days goes on like this, albeit family is fully, even more-than-enough provided, fractures in the bond between members may be inevitable. Cases of married couples cheating on each other when the other half chooses career over love and works nonstop, children getting neglected by their wealthy parents as well, are prime examples.
To conclude, this essay presents that the tension in the mental heath is indisputable and seeing the engaging salary as the paramount aspect to seek for in works indicates a shallow perspective since it gets love ones further away from each other. Analyzing the whole thing, I don't comply with the idea of considering being a high earner the second-to-none thing to look for when commencing a career or a daily working life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, so, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15762273902 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1418744805 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625322997416 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3008831527 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.571428571 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6428571429 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0570401873395 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019619837874 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319120840976 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0363232202825 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00996086151445 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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