The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been an increasingly popularised opinion that the foundational purpose of music is to help people relieve stress. Although music was initially created for entertainment, I disagree with the aforementioned statement for the following reasons.
Admittedly, music is widely considered as a source of pleasure. Whether through online videos or live performances, music obviously allows listeners to escape from daily annoyances for a few minutes. 80 percent of Americans, according to a recent report, listen to music on a daily basis to relax and unwind. Additionally, the fact that the earliest forms of music, namely concert venues or opera houses, were constructed for people to visit and immerse themselves in the symphony of the songs justifies the entertainment function of music.
However, music is a lot richer and more diverse than simply a form of entertainment. There are a myriad of songs produced to introduce the domestic culture to people from other countries. Artists like Van Cao and Choplin composed to serve this purpose, and it is not rare for countries to express their national identities through music. A salient example of this is the anthem of Vietnam, Tien Quan Ca, which was created to indicate the patriotic tradition of the Vietnamese as well as express the composer’s appreciation for the enormous efforts of the soldiers to protect the nation from invaders. Another point worth considering is that music is a way for artists to express themselves. This can be clearly seen in modern love songs, where singers share their stories and often make comments on the side. It can have an enormous influence on the listeners’ view of love, whether negatively or positively. For instance, some people say that songs of AMEE, a Vietnamese singer, make them feel like to go on a date.
In conclusion, while music can be an effective way to relax and unwind after a hectic day, it carries greater responsibility, specifically conveying the composer’s perspectives and cultural values.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...ly a form of entertainment. There are a myriad of songs produced to introduce the dome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03385863627 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603076923077 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3414717831 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.533333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140540391489 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496554957956 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466536680157 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944961392047 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569578341352 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.