Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents.
What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause?
More and more parents of contemporary families tend to have full-time jobs, resulting in less interaction with their posterities. This essay will suggest that the most remarkable cause is the heavy workload and discuss problems deriving from this issue.
The primary factor leading to the fact that parents hardly ever have enough time for their children is the enormous amount of work they have to fulfill during and after working hours. People who desire to have a brighter prospect for promotion in the future tend to be glued to computer’s screen all day in order to meet the working requirements and they are totally indifferent to their children’s mental wellness, emotions. An attributable contribution to this is the mindset that as long as they provide their babies with a great deal of money or a wide range of electronic equipments, materialistic possessions, they play an impeccably parental and maternal role in their home.
There are two significant drawbacks of this hectic lifestyle. Firstly, the children would be likely to underestimate their parents’ impact in their daily life owing to the fact that, without them, they could be still taken care of by the babysitter or their grandparents. Secondly, the nonchalance in terms of children’s mentality has detrimental effects throughout the child’s remaining life. To illustrate this, the last 10-year period has witnessed an enormous amount of abusive cases happening in the kindergarten, especially the private ones, which has traumatically lifelong consequences on the innocent babies, even infants.
To conclude, parents nowadays have tendency to fall into promotional pitfalls. As a result, family connection is overlooked, which present a major concern for the ever-increasing violent crime aiming at children and their mental illness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, still, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54255319149 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15806174038 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7040305564 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.090909091 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314908773705 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110464899466 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064446553783 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192277301388 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850521020142 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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