There has been a remarkable increase in the number of people who immigrate from rural areas to developed cities. This essay will delve both negative effects and solutions of this situation before drawing a reasonable conclusion. In my opinion, this trend can cause a number of serious problems, such as overcrowding and increased inflation rate due to lack of agricultural products.
Admittedly, after decades of speculation, municipal authorities were able to obtain fairly accurate information concerning population management and prices of local foods. Perhaps the main problem of immigrating from villages to cities is that overcrowding in cities, particularly metropolitian cities. A good illustration of this is that public services such as transport infrastructure or education facilities are not enough for citizens owing to migration trend in Istanbul. Secondly, this migration trend might create high inflation rate on local foods or dairy products. According to a report published by the New York Times, which is daily newspaper in the USA, prices of cereals increasing day-by-day due to lack of farmers in agricultural areas. Thus, the municipal authorities ought to be prudent concerning not only overcrowding problem but also local food prices.
Even though a number of measures have been taken to tackle these problems, the problems could not be solved yet but steps can definitely be taken to cope with immigration problems. The primary solution of this is that the government should allocate subsidiaries in order to provide more job oppurtunities in villages or towns. For instance, if the government created a new money source to improve farmers economies, farmers would prefer that stay in their villages, in Turkey. Secondly, local authorities should provide either more advanced agriculture equipments or new job opportunities in rural areas in order to measure this migration trend. Hence, the decision as to whether which solutions are applied must be taken in the context of the entire society.
In conclusion, it must be said that more and more people have been moved from villages to cities, which turn leads to a lot of problems, such as increased population and high inflation rates. However, to decrease unemployment rate in suburbs and to increase agricultural methods can solve these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 668, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...is migration trend. Hence, the decision as to whether which solutions are applied must be tak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00828969 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548209366391 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3006372584 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.75 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240031473709 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711730570931 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591197366364 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139666479799 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375480718898 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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