Multi-cultural society, where people of different ethnic groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the process of globalization, it is not uncommon that a growing number of societies become multicultural. In my opinion, multiculturalism is beneficial to the development of the whole society.
It is understandable that opponents of multiculturalism argue that this process will exert negative impacts on the social stability. To begin with, it will cause cultural invasion. This phenomenon is especially obvious in some developing countries, where there traditional culture is overwhelmed by those from developed countries and dominant cultures. Furthermore, ethnic conflicts often happen in multicultural regions. People in different backgrounds tend to be various in customs, religious beliefs and lifestyle, which may cause a rift between two or more groups. Finally, they argue that ethnic minorities are often discriminated in some countries and new immigrants find it is difficult to get accustomed to the new environment, which are potential threats to social harmony.
Despite the fact that there are some drawbacks of multiculturalism, I will argue that it is positive for the society in many aspects. Firstly, multicultural society will greatly promote the prosperity of culture. Take the United States, the most typical cultural-diversified country as an example, its dominant culture can be attributed by its extent absorption of different cultures. Besides, it offers a wider range of perspectives on social issues. People from different backgrounds can learn each other, which makes the society more tolerant and creative. In addition, in terms of economy, multinational corporations whose employees are from different regions can be more effectively capture global markets, increase customer base across nations and earn more profits. Therefore, the economy will greatly develop and people’s living standard will improve as a consequence.
In conclusion, while multi-cultural society has some disadvantages, people will enjoy more benefits from its merits in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82711864407 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40630572637 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4155192061 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186104432053 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534817170737 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458924491524 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106552566194 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536607323881 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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