As well as making money, businesses should also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Making profits is recognised as the intrinsic character of corporations in modern business society. However, some people argue that enterprises are obliged to fulfil social responsibilities as well. In my opinion, those two aspects are not mutual exclusive but interrelated with each other, and both of them are important.
It is understandable that the primary task of corporations is making profits. This is mainly because these organisations should firstly ensure their survival in the fierce competition of the market. They have to produce fortune for the sake of maintaining the operation, covering the huge overheads, as well as paying those employees. If a company cannot have basic profitability, it will be confronted with bankruptcy, which cannot satisfy the living requirements of its own employee, let alone making social contribution.
On the other hand, if a corporation could be competitive in the market and its revenue situation is relatively good, it is reasonable for it to concentrate more on social responsibilities. The reasons are also obvious. Firstly, it is the whole society that makes the corporation become profitable. Without the community’s recognition and support, it is not easy for a company to earn huge income in the long run. In order to repay the society, companies should spare no efforts to improve the quality of service and products they offer, which is an essential aspect of social responsibility. Besides, corporations have sufficient financial ability to solve some social problems such as sponsoring charities, which will efficiently benefits the whole society. Finally, making social contributions will to great extent boost companies’ reputation and enlarge their influence, which is beneficial for them making more profits in return.
In conclusion, fulfilling social responsibilities has positive effects both for the society and for the companies themselves. So it should be encouraged to practice in those profitable business organisations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6699669967 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36193007389 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0527468641 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211090688125 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663810095431 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318550556293 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12438604446 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219380620472 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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