Museums and art galleries should show local history and culture instead of work from different countries

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Most people like to visit the museum.Nowadays...
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...er to keep the art of their own country.It is considered that in museums every co...
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...country.It is considered that in museums every country should put only their own...
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...hat in museums every country should put only their own information.However, the ...
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...ew, this idea will gain economic growth.To explain it, India is known as a differe...
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...is known as a different cultural country,it has various languages,art, tradition, a...
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...adition, and different religious people.If other nations will put these all things...
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... these all things in their museums after foreigners will come to India to gain mo...
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...a to gain more information about culture,this trend may be can rise our economy.For e...
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...,this trend may be can rise our economy.For example,France has a very famous painti...
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...ands of tourists come to watch it. Hence,this notion can be helpful for the nations e...
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...ence,this notion can be helpful for the nations economy. Secondly,also,it...
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...hose who want to visit a whole world for art and history but they cannot afford i...
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...rt and history but they cannot afford it,regarding their own lands art gallery they can do...
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...ir own lands art gallery they can do it.For instance, the Mahatma Gandhi museum has...
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... instance, the Mahatma Gandhi museum has multiple customs arts from all around th...
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...rmation by a small picnic of this centre,regarding it pupils can improve their general kno...
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...can improve their general knowledge. To sum up,some have an opinion that only...
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...ll as art,should keep in an art gallery.I believe that all countries should encou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3488372093 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28634631636 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.382397947 49.4020404114 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 276.0 106.682146367 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.6 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 7.06120827912 439% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199700375218 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101134302574 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575547518184 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124206415766 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033901504201 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.0946893788 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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