Museums and art galleries should show local history and culture instead of work from different countries.
Most people like to visit the museum.Nowadays, time most nations prefer to keep the art of their own country.It is considered that in museums every country should put only their own information.However, the leading nations try to explore art and craft from all around the world I largely agree with this statement,my inclination is elaborated further.
To begin with,discussing the first view, this idea will gain economic growth.To explain it, India is known as a different cultural country,it has various languages,art, tradition, and different religious people.If other nations will put these all things in their museums after foreigners will come to India to gain more information about culture,this trend may be can rise our economy.For example,France has a very famous painting of Monalisa,thousands of tourists come to watch it. Hence,this notion can be helpful for the nation's economy.
Secondly,also,it is beneficial for those who want to visit a whole world for art and history but they cannot afford it,regarding their own land's art gallery they can do it.For instance, the Mahatma Gandhi museum has multiple customs arts from all around the world.Moreover, the child is a backbone of the nation, they can grow up with these types of all information by a small picnic of this centre,regarding it pupils can improve their general knowledge.
To sum up,some have an opinion that only a country's history, as well as art,should keep in an art gallery.I believe that all countries should encourage their people to a knowledge of various countries' traditions Otherwise, they will have limited knowledge regarding the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3488372093 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28634631636 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.382397947 49.4020404114 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 276.0 106.682146367 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.6 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 7.06120827912 439% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199700375218 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101134302574 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575547518184 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124206415766 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033901504201 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.0946893788 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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