not so many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport
In the contemporary era, most of people in the world gravitate to leave the bicycle as the main transportation’s vehicle. One important aspect of this reality is most of people have been changing their transportation mode from manual mode which it represented by bicycle to auto mobile system which it refers to car, bus as well as motorcycle. In my view, there are three factors that caused most of people today prefer to utilize auto mobile transportation than bicycle, such as riding by auto mobile is more efficient and effective than bicycle as well as the owner of motor cycle should gain the social prestige from their communities. I hold this view for several reasons which are set out below.
First, I would like to argue that even though utilizing green transportation such as bicycle, scooter, and skate board are cheapest and might made people healthier than motor transportation, albeit green transportation tend to ineffective due to take more time. due to these conditions, most of people believe that riding by auto mobile are more effective than green transportation.
On the other hand, referring the data from research Centre for sustainable City Studies at International Institute of Sciences the Netherlands stated that there are the perception in rural and urban society that the people who have car and motor cycle are the rich man, and they could gain the social prestige from the others.
However, even though there are many research from naturalist scholars who showed that there are many positive impact which made by green transportation to strengthening sustainable environment and reducing the number of disease in the society, albeit they do not publish and socializing their research results massively.
taking everything into consideration, I believe that all of countries in the world should campaign riding by bicycle and various green transportation as the alternative vehicles which it could reduce the environmental damage as the effect of auto mobile pollution and it could reconstruct the people for staying in healthy lifestyle.
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, well, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28614457831 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03305176906 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509036144578 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.91513406 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 195.0 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8888888889 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185614416329 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862807687719 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569976011251 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953235690054 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412788807249 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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