Nowadays, celebrities increasingly have the status of role models, in particular for younger people. Do you see this as a positive or negative development?
In the past few decades, celebrities' influence on youth has been a controversial issue in many countries. While some people argue that this trend is advantageous, there are some concerns among the public about the negative impacts that celebrities may have on youngsters. I am inclined to think that the drawbacks of this development seem to outweigh its benefits.
It is indisputable that celebrities being young people’s role models could bring about numerous advantages. Most significantly, young adults inspired by celebrities' achievements could be more motivated to strive for success just like their role models. Indeed, as famous people are usually the successful ones, by learning from them, teenagers can be more career-oriented and thus more hard-working. In addition, copying celebrities could help timid young people gain self-confidence. For example, by wearing costumes and behaving like successful persons, youngsters are less apprehensive about themselves, which is essential during formative years.
However, from my perspective, this trend exerts more cons than pros. It is obvious that despite their great fame, a considerable number of celebrities are rather scandalous than talented. This may have misleading effects on juveniles who see their role models through rose-tinted glasses since they could take scandals as an integral part of being famous. Furthermore, some celebrities have an unhealthy lifestyle due to their job; hence, it might be hazardous for adolescents idolising them to follow a similar style. For instance, when imitating models who regularly lose weight, numerous teenage girls may suffer from various health problems like anorexia.
To sum up, I believe that celebrities being role models of youth is more of a disadvantageous trend. Although idolising famous people is not wrong, young adults should only learn from their positive contributions but not be overly obsessed with them to the extent of even losing their own identity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60465116279 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04451290692 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634551495017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8895837566 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.466666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232459248363 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782122382655 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441213366819 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139121331471 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235278956791 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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