Nowadays, families do not have meals together. Is this a negative or positive development?
In this day and age, almost families don’t have meals together because each people have their own works and study so they don’t have the same break time to have meal together. although it has some drawbacks but the benefits outweigh its.
On the one hand, don’t having meal together can make the connection and the sympathy between each family members less. With many families, the dinner or the lunch is the only time that all the members can sit together and talk about their stories. Some psychoanalysts have state that people have tendency to eat more when eating together and it can also decrease the problem of watching TV when eating with children. Finally, there are some solutions for that: they can spend an amount of time before going to bed to stay in a place and share their difficulties and happiness. The parents can create a habit that don’t watching TV when eating for children since they are very small.
On the other hand, not eating meals together brings many advantages. First of all, it can suit for each person’s timetable so they can use their time by the most valuable way and nobody have to wait for other people. Secondly, if the families’ members are hard-working, they can cook different meal that suit for their taste. Some doctors have said that: eating together can prevent and healing the Alzheimer because it helps maintain social interactions and keeping a healthy diet.
In conclusion, despite not eating together has many disadvantages but they all have the own solutions and the benefits that it brings are outweigh the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90334572491 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42445882218 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524163568773 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8770479657 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.916666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204670614377 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875253239799 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842738629116 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152023313204 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699959976088 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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