Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own know
It is indisputable that humans nowadays have shifted to a lifestyle in which individual requirements for delicious food have emerged not just to fulfil hunger. And thanks to technological advances in terms of cooking, people have been direct beneficiaries of easier food preparation as it saves us time and helps us to stay away from fast food shops and restaurants, which are deemed to have detrimental effects on our health.
First of all, the easier food preparation process provides people with more time for other activities. Most people, both in the past and nowadays, are regularly inundated with work due to their hectic schedules, which may lead to insufficient time for a decent breakfast, nutritious lunch and dinner. Nevertheless, by using kitchen appliances such as microwave ovens, rice cookers, coffee makers and many more that now people are capable of preparing their own food to bring to their workplace or schools. Another way to exemplify this trend is that traditionally, cooking was a full-time job that was usually carried out by women, who then did not have extra time to do other things including pursuit of a career outside the home, and the fact that food has become easier and faster to prepare had a huge impact on women and their options in life as they can freely chasing their own dreams and desires.
Second, as cooking is no longer a challenge for people, many of them decide to prepare meals on their own without relying on fast food shops and bistros. This considerably improves and maintains their health because fast food and other mass-produced dishes in restaurants are opined to contain high levels of calories from sugar or fat with little protein, vitamins or minerals, which might lessen the quality of their physical strength. In addition to that, eating outside is often expensive and therefore, by avoiding this activity, people can save a great deal of money to spend on other categories in their daily life.
In brief, it is true that preparing food is now an easy task to handle and this has significantly benefited people by saving them time and money to involve in other jobs as well as leading them to a more healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'chase'
Suggestion: chase
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ddition to that, eating outside is often expensive and therefore, by avoiding thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, nevertheless, second, then, therefore, well, in addition, in brief, such as, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94037940379 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68211369792 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571815718157 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.6262678753 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.3 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.9 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202082502362 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848735896938 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353552605271 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118596571223 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276461503931 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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