NOWADAYS, FOOTBALL SUPPORTERS BEHAVE VIOLENTLY. WHAT IS THE CAUSE AND HOW DO WE SOLVE IT?
In recent times, sports have been supported and respected on a worldwide scale by millions of people on the planet; in particular football is a typical instance due to the hype and expectations of citizens for the World Cup every four years. Yet, there is a hindrance behind the reputation which is the overexcitement of football crowd. There are reasons specifically explaining why and solutions for those.
To begin with, this predicament has occurred because of a few reasons. Matches can be deemed perfect opportunities to win some money through a bet. There are a plenty of such business organizations running professionally and still, draw a great deal of attention and attendance from the locals. Therefore, their emotional limitation impacted thanks to poor results would lead to adverse behaviors. Another factor is that football hooligans evolve into aggressive and unpleasant people when referees perhaps miss a foul committed by a competitor while tackling or give their favourite team a yellow or red card, which they consider unfair or inappropriate.
We can prevent these quandaries by catering more adequate security systems on the stands as a precaution against any fights and violence or creating more material punishments for overreaction. Inevitably, a number of exceptions who are not afraid of those ordinary punishments must be treated differently, riot police have to join the race. In addition, one solution for the referee is to be provided modernised equipment in order to successfully complete their job with the reduction of complaints or altercation from hooligans or passionate fans.
In conclusion, violence in sports generally and in football specifically appear to ruin the beauty of their own when sports are supposed to be positively draw attention and should be followed by the idea of prioritizing our health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35273972603 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11062041613 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650684931507 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6656403863 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0579012864516 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.017600452044 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229963518976 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0348937886151 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227857042873 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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