Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Never has the topic concerning health, however, when it comes to how to choose a way to deal with the healthy problems. Some peole adamant that trying alternative medinces and treatments is conducive, while others contend that visiting usual doctor is essencial. From my own perspective, the two views are not mutually exclusive.
It is undeniable that use alternative medicines and treatment to solve health problems,would bring some profits. First and foremost,using the various medicines and treatments give us a convenient remedy enviroment. It is not rare to see that many people in serious condition can not go to the hospital to see the doctor without the relatives’ company. It is usually because unhealthy people are unwilling to face doctor, which means that flexible treatments and various medicines are more confortable for them. Moreover, the alternative medicines and treatments is the symbol of the new remedy technology. It is generally believed that some healthy problems can not be cured by doctor but technology. The key reason lies in the fact that technology is developing so quickly and it can precisely solve some healthy problems. As a consequence, may be choose these treatment can change it easily.
Although the benefits of many treatments are multifarious, the merits of visiting usual doctor can not be underestimated. To begin with, it is not uncommen to see that some people’s health problems are becoming worse and it is because of this that they can’t eat the medicines properly. Hence, under such circumstances, doctor can choose treatment for patients preciously.
To sum up,trying alternative medicines and treatments or visiting their usual doctor be profitable for solving healthy problems. Only by intergrating the two can we enjoy the pleasure rather than pressure and make the education serve its intended purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34353741497 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03847365968 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2958008148 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.1875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274682906495 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934166348296 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660038104267 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17538481737 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262676964297 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.