Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Today, more and more people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments without seeing their doctors regularly. Personally, I think this is a negative development and will give you reasons to support my view.
On the one hand, there is some reliable information when it comes to trying alternative medicines and home treatments. In fact, the elderly often learn from their ancestors how to self-medicate pain. For example, they can clearly remember the herbal drink their ancestors left behind to cure headaches, backaches, stomachaches, toothaches, and other ailments. In addition, those methods are cheap and convenient. Catching them doesn't take much effort or time.But people can still buy the wrong medicine
On the other hand, seeing a doctor can have many positive effects. Because doctors have graduated and they have the privilege to cure us. There is strict control over the quality of their work. And your doctor can evaluate your health and diagnose any potential problems. They can understand the patient's condition and prescribe the best medicine.
In conclusion, the recent development in trying medical alternatives is negative and some policies are needed to prevent it. Medicine should be available everywhere. This new trend is probably only temporary and people will soon avoid it.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 427, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...are cheap and convenient. Catching them doesnt take much effort or time.But people can...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ng them doesnt take much effort or time.But people can still buy the wrong medicine...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4347826087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75358081161 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657004830918 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3623323355 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3571428571 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302570677418 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830435425632 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841723312898 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186291183354 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128682863469 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 427, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...are cheap and convenient. Catching them doesnt take much effort or time.But people can...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ng them doesnt take much effort or time.But people can still buy the wrong medicine...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4347826087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75358081161 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657004830918 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3623323355 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3571428571 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302570677418 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830435425632 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841723312898 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186291183354 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128682863469 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.