Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
Globalisation has made the world a smaller village. Many a new industry has built into existence. Although, the tourism industry has been organised as on the international level in the universe. Since the tense situation is often observed due to multi-racism despite unites the people; however, I disagree with this opinion due to the numerous advantage of tourism
The phenomenon of tourism has flourished by leaps and bounds. There are major three attributes that support to tourist activities. Firstly, by visiting on the different regions, research on each culture and historical, religious can not only be conducted but also enjoy the natural beauty. By this way, people will get to know about all the part of earth planets Such as island and wildlife can be learned through practical experience that knowledge can be pass on to others. Secondly, in the perspective of the business sector, it is prominent trade for earning money: visa embassies, consultants, guiding specialist, hotel and restaurants of nearby tourist destination, are dependent on it. What is more, hosting foreigners will strengthen the bonding of different traditional people.
On another hand, some circumstance occurs due to such practices. A first such concern could be examined in case of misleading the non-native people, as when they are unknown of the direction, trapped in the net of fraud people. The headlines of harassing are often seen in the daily news. Resulting in hatred feeling among the countries for each other. Secondly, travellers throw litter and wastes here and there which cause a major problem to clean up in such a large amount, as it is seen that the living animal, other creature life are influenced when they eat the plastic material is thrown beside the nature beauty park.
In conclusion, in spite of having some negatives impacts, the tourist industry made remarkable progress in its field because people want to live freely. Since travelling threats environment problem, tourist is not solely accountable for all that. This is a sign of scarcity of the management
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is a sign of scarcity of the management
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19701492537 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82136772483 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620895522388 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5708311878 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.411764706 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128871384133 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365530892795 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524295909698 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804770633105 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077904686337 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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